Sorry for my lateness, took some time with save converting to png and one gave me a hard time with scaling and it's paths/fill color. Here's the first set. Will post my updated Business Package as well with these updates.
The texturing is a bit strange. I think it would be a lot better just solid black. The texture doesn't match the ink look. Why is there a box around the icon-logo?! Is it going to look like that when you put it things??? Have you considered making it "Med" on the icon so it matches the logo? But its greatly improved from the older sketches.
I think the checkered pattern was due to a conversion fault and did not go through all the way. I have seen the original update, it is solid black as well with the box, it was not there either. The icon and logo name differ but the message get across. It doesnt have to exactly be the same with the icon and logo. Also limit to the amount of ! and ? you use. Sounds like you're yelling at everyone, calm down. Danielle. Continuing on with the matter, you can try to make the letters on your icon flow a bit better with the original type. Perhaps it might be the sudden change to the pixal M and the cursive E. Try to find a medium between both letters and try to make it work. Other than that good job.
You have a good concept on what you want. Instead of putting your name within the paint mark maybe you should try a signature for your name and put designs in a good typeface. Just an idea you could try.
I like the variety it has & fixing the pixels of the "M" could accomplish the look you are trying to get. Maybe using more/smaller pixels to make it smoother?
The texturing is a bit strange. I think it would be a lot better just solid black. The texture doesn't match the ink look. Why is there a box around the icon-logo?! Is it going to look like that when you put it things??? Have you considered making it "Med" on the icon so it matches the logo? But its greatly improved from the older sketches.
ReplyDeleteI think the checkered pattern was due to a conversion fault and did not go through all the way. I have seen the original update, it is solid black as well with the box, it was not there either. The icon and logo name differ but the message get across. It doesnt have to exactly be the same with the icon and logo. Also limit to the amount of ! and ? you use. Sounds like you're yelling at everyone, calm down. Danielle. Continuing on with the matter, you can try to make the letters on your icon flow a bit better with the original type. Perhaps it might be the sudden change to the pixal M and the cursive E. Try to find a medium between both letters and try to make it work. Other than that good job.
ReplyDeleteYou have a good concept on what you want. Instead of putting your name within the paint mark maybe you should try a signature for your name and put designs in a good typeface. Just an idea you could try.
ReplyDeleteI like the variety it has & fixing the pixels of the "M" could accomplish the look you are trying to get. Maybe using more/smaller pixels to make it smoother?
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